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"Hey chica, how are you?" said Antonio.

The only reply he received was the sound of the wind blowing by, no words being said back.

"Come on (Name), are you still mad at me? Look I brought you your favourite flowers. I'm really sorry. Will you forgive me?" he continued, placing the bouquet in front of you.

Again, no words were said back, and pretty soon it started raining. However Antonio did not leave, letting the rain hit him and drip down onto the grass below.

"Oi Toni, we should probably leave now." said Gilbert, walking up behind him.

"Oui mon ami, it's raining. You're going to get sick like this." warned Francis, also appearing.

"No guys, I'm not leaving until (Name) tells me that she forgives me," he replied before turning back to you, "Please (Name)?"

"Stupid tomato bastard…she never blamed you from the start." mumbled a certain Italian a bit sadly, unlike his usual grumpy self.

"Then why won't she tell me she forgives me?" asked Toni.

"IT'S BECAUSE SHE CAN'T YOU F**KING IDIOT!!!"

"Oh, and why not?" retorted Toni.

"SHE'S DEAD!"

"No she's not! She just won't forgive me!"

"JUST ADMIT IT TONI!!!" yelled out Lovino, immediately silencing everyone else, knowing that he only called him that when he was being super serious.

"Come on Toni, we all know it's hard on you, but you have to face the truth. Would (Name) be happy seeing you like this?" said Gilbert, making Antonio freeze.

"Maybe we should give him a moment to calm down," Francis told Gilbert before turning back towards Antonio, "Mon ami, we will be in the car waiting. Come back when you've settled everything."

And with that, the tree of them walked away, leaving a sobbing Antonio kneeling in front of your grave.

After he cried off all of his tears, he continued to sit there, contemplating on what his friends had said.

"Maybe they're right. (Name) wouldn't want to be acting like this." he said to himself standing up and walking back towards his friends.

Just before they left, Antonio quickly screamed out, "I'll be happy only for you (Name)!", before the car sped away.

'Only for you…'
Well, here's my first tragedy story!
Dunno if I should be happy about that though... XD

I'm not very confident in this one considering mostly everything I've ever written is fluff, fluff and what? More fluff! XD

So... please tell me how this story was, if it was too rushed and ways to improve so I can write this kind of stories better. :)

P.S. Spain is quite OOC but I can't see him being all happy like normal so...this is angsty Spain? Yeah... XD

Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  New member
DANGIT WHY SO MUCH TRAGEDY Sad fayse. 
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lullabyly Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh I know...I died when he turned around and I saw dat ass of his and, let'S just say that the sight left me breathless...literally...that's why he blames himself
((you're welcome for the background story btw))
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i thought i was giving him a cold shoulder...
Turns out i WAS!
except it's full body one :| (Blank Stare) Cannotevenplz 
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deer-princess Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Meh.... Meeeeeeh.... Why am I always dead? ;~;
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Laketree Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
How did I die? Other than that one question I loved it. For some reasons I find tragedy stories intriguing.
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fairytailrox98 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
The reader can think of their own idea on that.
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Laketree Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Well thats no fun cause I can't think of a hundred ways that I died.
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SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Freak cow-herding accident.
You'rewelcome //shotdeadsomanytimes
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Laketree Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
That works.
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SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Yes, yes it does. :3
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